Peer Review Feedback

The peer review was very helpful. Vishal gave me good points about how to make my paper relate back to the definition of my word to make the paper more relevant to the topic of the paper. I also was pointed out some of my weaker points that I needed to remove from the paper, because they worked against my argument more than they helped. Next, Vishal showed me how to restructure some of my sentences that were very awkward. Finally, he looked for some grammatical errors that needed to be fixed. Some things that I thought could go better is fixing the rhetorical appeals in my paper. When I look over someone else's paper I now know that grammatical errors are the last thing i should look for, and that I should focus on the actual content of the paper and how it relates to the purpose of the paper.